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05 November 2001 @ 05:29 pm
This is just to say...  
...that this is really old, but I like it anyway. ^___^ For my English class last year we had to write a copy change of one of William Carlos Williams poems. This is what I did, and it was primarily meant to annoy/freak out my teacher.

She never read it though. That bitch.



This Is Just To Say

William Carlos Williams

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold



This Is Just To Say

Copy change

I have run
over your
cat that was
in the road

and which
you probably
loved with
all your heart

Forgive me
I did not see
the ball of
orange and white fur
 
 
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